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Sunday, July 27, 2008

immaturity...(probably a poem..!!!)

Immaturity

Twas a cold odd night
felt a bit uncomfortable to settle
Sat down for a short nap
Alas! Couldn’t succeed..!

Then did I reach a place
A place so dear to me
Twas my brothers home.

We then went to a bar,
A bar with a dance floor
Brother met his friend there,
And I her cousin….!!

Sat dumbstruck at her beauty.
Sat dumbstruck at her curvy moves,
Sat dumbstruck at her elegance,
Sat dumbstruck at her grace…

I rose upto her to speak,
To get close , to spark..
To initiate a feeling in her.

With all the guts n dare,
Asked thy a drink ….
“cranberry err…breezer…”, was the reply__!!
Felt heaven for the reply.

With a bottle in one hand ,
And I on the couch beside her…
Put it into the mouth , puffed…
And a sweet smoke was all over…

Conversation started ----fun flew in,
Laughter was what I could hear,
Eyes were what I could see,
Love was what I could feel.

Time was up…
Fire danced on bartenders table,
Twas time to move, to depart.

On way back home,
I changed, I felt I changed ,
Was quiet happy for the exchange,
Exchange of phone numbers……..
Saw the moon above , could sight her there.

Slept like a baby , hugged with pillows,
Woke up early ,to see the beauty,
Beauty of the nature.

The early sun , bright , sensible and
And could sight her there with the sun…
Such was her grace and beauty
Truly natural……

My day and night was all she…
She settled down in easily,
In my heart , my mind and my soul.

Twas all over,
Over for the rest of life,
Thy was done with it.

Distance was the reason
Loneliness was the factor,
Phones me and tells,…
“cant still move on”…

Me again dumbstruck..(history repeats itself)
Nothing to reply back
And silence was all over…
A deathly silence was felt …
As if I in the grave..
And she in the graveyard…!

She broke the silence,
Asked for a reply…
“I free you”, was my answer..
Hanged up the phone ,
Held outta it …
All gone, all done !!

2 comments:

Tittynope said...

hey Ronzi nice one.............gud..keep it up

Unknown said...

mujhe kabhi nai pata tha u do all dis its wonderfulll shonu.....