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Sunday, July 27, 2008

THE SILENT ANSWER

Twas the moment when my eyes broadened
Coz I saw my life , my love.

Twas when I was in a lounge,
All set with my friends.

She was there, sitting all alone ,
Letting her lonely feelings capture her.

Was always least bothered about others
But this time my heart beat harder,faster.

Her twinkling eyes made mine sparkle,
Her hairs let my feelings fly.

Her smile to the waitress made my
Heart fly,soothed all mah inner side.

And then came , a music which rang in my ears,
A shower of flowers made me soft and
A unique current passed through me.

I couldn’t resist myself,
So leaving all my friends behind,
I went,
I went near her..

She stared at me , meaning to ask me
who I am…

but I was dumbstruck,


I told her about her beauty,
Praised GOD for her.

She smiled , but still there was a pain,
A lonely feeling in her eyes…

Gave her the confidence , the trust
Knowing not what the reason is..

Unknowingly , I forced her to speak ,
To spell her name for me..

And what all I got was a paper
Written on it by her as………..

I qualmed down for seconds until
Was back in this puzzling world

But she wasn’t seen….searched her
But all in vain…

I wonder about this world , full
Of complexities, life is upon you

For some it’s a boon, for some it’s a curse,
But being dumb is obviously a GOD’S wish.

4 comments:

Unknown said...

thats too mature man ..
may be think of changin the name of ur blog man.\\


thats simply toooooooooooooo goood

ankush khandelwal said...

hmm gud lines, gud thinking, gud presentation,gud feelings indeed a perfect one!!!
hats of to you ronzi!!!!!

rOnzi said...

thanx for the comments...
well dat was indeed a very good one and i myself feel cold blood runnin in me every time i read it.

ranjan gulati said...

srsly u shud change da name...nvr xpected u 2 write such..sahi hai..